Topic = GLPS school for magic
Class 23 version : Out, love, insolence, caught
- 2 similes and/or metaphors
- 1 example of alliteration
- 1 example of sarcasm, irony or oxymoron
Now let me begin my story.
There is a school called GLPS school, and they teach magic. So it is unknown to muggle people(people who can't do magic) and it is famous for wizards and witches and they want to entrance this school. This school has very nice appearance just as Europe's Gothic architecture, and facilities are the best. They teach magic very intensively with fun and the cost is very very expensive, also this school is the safest place in the world except the bank named "Hogwart". At Hogwart the banker's are all the Goblins, and there are lots of vaults.
Now let me tell you the characters of this story. There is a boy named John, and he is an orphan, so he grew up at his cousin's house and he is famous in magician's world, because, he attacked from the evil named "Tom Riddle", but he stand and he is alive. And there is a girl named Harriot, and she is a muggle born(sometimes, muggle parents can have magicians sons or daughters). And there is a boy named Roland and he has lots of siblings and all siblings entrance to GLPS school, so their family became poor. Also, there is a boy named "Alex", and his family is royal, so he is rich and can do magic very well, but he can't get along with friends, because he is an insolence boy. So he is just as evil. So everyone don't play with him and they say "Whatever".
On the first day, they learned how to ride on a magic broom. John's father was a Quidditch(the broom stick game) player, so John was talented at riding on a magic broomstick. Also, Alex was good as John, too Also they learned how to levitate,and they all learned well.
After 3years.....
They find a strange diary in the bathroom. The diary was strange because when we write, then the word disappear.This diary belongs to the evil "Tom Riddle". Tom Riddle was a great magician who graduated from the GLPS school, but he wanted to live forever, so he broke his soul to 7pieces. John is the enemy of Tom Riddle. So John tried to kill Tom Riddle. John has a special ability, that can speak with snakes. And the GLPS school's basement has a snake that have poison and John kill this snake and he killed this diary, so Tom Riddle, died.
After 10 years...
John married with Roland's sister and Roland and Harriot married, and they lived happy life.
This is the end of the story.
Thank you
I like the way how she uses Harry Potter to give more better understandings, but I thought she could have been little more creative.
답글삭제But, in overall I thought it was a great story.