Book review(charlie and the chocolate factory)

I read the book named the "Charlie and the chocolate factory" let me tell you this story.

There is a boy named Charlie, and his families are poor. And there is a factory named "Willi Wonka Factory" and that factory make a vey very delicious chocolate, and also expensive chocolate. So Charlie can eat this chocolate only in his birthday. Then one day, Willi Wonka Factory made a special event, that invite 5people to show their factory. So in chocolate, there is a golden ticket, and a person who have this can visit to this factory.
Charlie bought this chocolate, because of his birthday, and there was a golden ticket inside. He was very happy, and he went to this factory with his grandfather, because, his grandfather was a guard of this factory long times ago. There were five people and they went inside of this factory. There were lots of mysterious things, including bubble gum maker, television maker, thinner maker. 4 people except Charlie experienced this, because they were confident and they were too boost of them,  but they failed.  In fact, this event was to choose the successor, that can own this company, because the first owner Willi wonka didn't have any sons or daughters, also he was very old .So Charlie became a second owner of this factory.

and this is the end of this story.

Thank you ,

GLPS 3rd week project

Topic = GLPS school for magic


Class 23 version : Out, love, insolence, caught
- 2 similes and/or metaphors
- 1 example of alliteration
- 1 example of sarcasm, irony or oxymoron


Now let me begin my story.


There is a school called GLPS school, and they teach magic. So it is unknown to muggle people(people who can't do magic) and it is famous for wizards and witches and they want to entrance this school. This school has very nice appearance just as Europe's Gothic architecture, and facilities are the best. They teach magic very intensively with fun and the cost is very very expensive, also this school is the safest place in the world except the bank named "Hogwart". At Hogwart the banker's are all the Goblins, and there are lots of vaults.


Now let me tell you the characters of this story. There is a boy named John, and he is an orphan, so he grew up at his cousin's house and he is famous in magician's world, because, he attacked from the evil named "Tom Riddle", but he stand and he is alive. And there is a girl named Harriot, and she is a muggle born(sometimes, muggle parents can have magicians sons or daughters). And there is a boy named Roland and he has lots of siblings and all siblings entrance to GLPS school, so their family became poor. Also, there is a boy named "Alex", and his family is royal, so he is rich and can do magic very well, but he can't get along with friends, because he is an insolence boy. So he is just as evil. So everyone don't play with him and they say "Whatever". 


On the first day, they learned how to ride on a magic broom. John's father was a Quidditch(the broom stick game) player, so John was talented at riding on a magic broomstick. Also, Alex was good as John, too Also they learned how to levitate,and they all learned well.   


After 3years.....


They find a strange diary in the bathroom. The diary was strange because when we write, then the word disappear.This diary belongs to the evil "Tom Riddle". Tom Riddle was a great magician who graduated from the GLPS school, but he wanted to live forever, so he  broke his soul to 7pieces. John is the enemy of Tom Riddle. So John tried to kill Tom Riddle. John has a special ability, that can speak with snakes. And the GLPS school's basement has a snake that have poison and John kill this snake and he killed this diary, so Tom Riddle, died.


After 10 years...


John married with Roland's sister and Roland and Harriot married, and they lived happy life.


This is the end of the story.
Thank you

3rd week project option

Class 23

Your story should be titled:
______ GLPS or GLPS ________

Some suggestions:
Twilight at GLPS, GLPS School for Magic, GLPS Spy Story, Haunted GLPS

You need to have:
2 similes and/or metaphors
1 example of alliteration
1 example of sarcasm, irony or oxymoron

You must use these words in your story:

Out, love, insolence, caught/ catch

Your story should have 0~1 killings, almost no blood.

80~300 word

Old Tasks:

Introduction

summary of creativity lecture

complaint

2 compliments

apology

Offline:

review and editing of classmate's writing

New tasks (third week):

editing and correcting previous posts

Story about GLPS

Blog posts on additional subjects are always welcome.  Please, write about your hobby or hometown or favourite thing.

Coming soon!

Edit and make suggestions regarding classmate's GLPS story

In class activity:

Mnemonics

New Week:

Common review of popular books or movies.  In groups, students will choose a book.  Individually, each student will review their book.  In the end, there should be 3-5 books and 3-5 review of each book.

Introduce Mr Dean to a Korean music group or song.  Persuade Mr Dean to listen to current music, not his old stuff!

                                                                                                             

This video is the parody of the drama "Brain"

I'd like you guys to enjoy this video.

Apology to Lieju

(from Mr.Dean's blog)

Dear LieJu

LieJu, I wasn't meant to tease you. I just wanted to give everyone fun, because everyone was sleepy at that time. Sorry, LieJu. I'll apologize to you in front of Class21.

I  know that your height is your problem. And I also know that I must not tease you with your height. I didn't expect that you will cry in the dorm room because of that

I'll never do this again, also I hope you to don't cry and enjoy in this camp.
Bye!!

2012.1.6
From .....

Compliment 2

Now I would like to give compliments to my parents.

They are very kind, and they take care of me very well. Also, they are earning money, because of me and they try to educate me more than them. Furthermore they buy me many things that I want to buy such as laptop, Galaxy Tab and I-Pod.

And they make our house very nice, because I can study well in my house,

thanks.

Compliment 1

There are 5 roommates in my room and all of my roommates are good at studying, except me. But today, I would like to tell you about one of my roommate called "Yunnie"

She is from Seoul and she is good at studying, so she got a first grade this semester, in her school. Also, she is good at debating, so she got a lot of awards from many debate competitions, and she can do penguin game very well than any other roommates. 

Moreover, she is look like "you E" the singer of the "Afterschool" group.

Thank you.